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07-22-2010, 09:00 PM
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Needs Improvement
Hey everyone
I'm starting a blog in the attempts to become a better writer. please take a look, you won't be sorry you clicked!
"NEEDS IMPROVEMENT"
http://www.theoriginaljackal.blogspot.com/
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07-22-2010, 10:04 PM
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#2
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Re: Needs Improvement
Good luck, I did the same thing a few months ago since I was interested in possibly writing. And figured it would be a way to just practice putting words down on 'paper'
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07-22-2010, 10:25 PM
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Re: Needs Improvement
" Sunglasses on the Subway.
There is a growing subculture of these people that continues to intrigue me. While wearing sunglasses outside is a great idea, I promise to you that there is no UV radiation in an underground tunnel surrounded by concrete. Unless you so happen to be sensitive to the light and you actually require sunglasses indoors for medical reasons, you do not look cool-you look like a total douchbag. Why don’t you just pop that collar, wear an ill-fitting shirt, and end it. Seriously this has got to stop. The only place you should be wearing sunglasses indoors is if you are trying them on or you are in a neon-sign store. With the latter being a rare occurrence, save yourself the embarrassment and take off those glasses buddy."
This.
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07-22-2010, 10:52 PM
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Location: Montreal (a.k.a. Iacon, Qc)
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Re: Needs Improvement
Prolonged wearing of sunglasses indoors can really mess with your eyes too. Good job on the blog!!
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07-27-2010, 07:50 PM
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Re: Needs Improvement
updates!
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08-16-2010, 05:51 AM
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Location: Brantford, Ontario
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Re: Needs Improvement
Man, my blog is so sorely neglected. This reminds me that I should get back to it. On the note of writing improvement, I joined up to MyOuterSpace to collaborate with other writers. its paid off well actually, making more progress on my novel. And any progress is good progress in that department.
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