Fan Fiction Beast Wars/Beast Wars neo Cross over Comic

[Jazz227]

I am not too sure where to put this so here we go! haha This is just something random i wanted to do for a while, i have a long but not done Sort of story for it, Try to refrain from commenting on my writing skills as i am very tired and did this in an hour
Okay i decided to make this into a script, mostly because once i do the actual comic book i have something to follow!
Here are the first 2 pages of the script
I hope you guys like it, and could give me some ideas and some things aren't too indepth yet, but i will get to it at one point!


Narrator: On Earth, A battle goes on between the Maximals and the Predacons. The battle has lasted over a century, and the Beast wars rage on. The Maximals and what remains of the Autobots are still searching for the Axalon.

Maximal Computer: A rift has opened in the sky over Sector 5.213, Alert is in affect as of now, Lock down liniment.

RatTrap: Oh man! This is not good! We better get to safety like the computer says!!!

Optimus Prime: No Rattrap, we need to check this out and make sure the Predacons don’t get there first. We need to get a reading on it to make sure it won’t kill us.

Rattrap: This is not going to go well

*SMACK!*

Rhinox: Rattrap just prepare the reader so we can get this done with.

Narrator: In the Predacon base the Predacons are preparing to take down whatever may come through the Rift.

Megatron: Predacons! We must get to the rift first, Yes. We must make sure we can take control of the area before those Maximals do, Yes.

Blacharania: Megatron! The Maximal base will be on lockdown, the rift has put a scare on their computer, and I am sure the Maximals are already on their way to get control of the area!

Megatron: Fine, Blacharania and Tarantulus, go to the maximal base and destroy it while they are not there! They will be so distracted they will lose to the might of the Predacons! Yes. The rest of you come with me to get control of the area, because if we do not succeed I will not be happy, No.

Narrator: While the Predacons and the Maximals were on their way to the surrounding area of the rift, Blacharania and
Tarantulus get the bomb together to blow the Maximal base to the outer moons!*

Narrator: As the Maximals and Predacons were arriving they noticed one thing, the rift was a portal to another Dimension, but the portal was only sending, not receiving.

Optimus prime: Okay Rattrap,Dinobot and cheetor go take care of the Predacons while Rhinox and I set up the Reader to see where this thing leads!

Cheetor: Okay Big Bot! Let’s trash some Pred butt’s!

Dinobot: Finally! My blade can take Predacon spark!

Megatron: You Maximals have no chance against us! Waspinator, QuickStrike, ATTACK!

*Battle scene*

Blacharania: perfect! The Maximals are fighting while we are in here to destroy the Axalon!

Tarantulus: Just hurry up, the Maximal computer will detect us soon enough!

Maximal Computer: Another Rift has opened in Sector 9.43, Alert to Maximals Near by!

Blacharania: Looks like something BIG is going to happen, and we don’t have to do a thing!

Tarantulus: I think we should go check out what is going on! Just be sure to set the timer on the bomb before we leave!

Narrator: As the Maximals were at a relentless fight against the Predacons, The rift over them begins to pulsate.*

Rattrap: Hey Rhinox! What is going on!!!

Rhinox: I think something is coming through!

*A big flash, and two things come falling down from the Rift*

Cheetor: Big Bot look! It’s Scorponok and Terrasaur!

*Waspinator looks up*

Waspinator: Waspinator think this was a bad day to go outside.

*SQUISH!*

Waspinator: Oh… Waspinator Hurt in every Area except his head.7

*Terrasaurs Gun falls on his head* *BOINK*

Quickstrike: What are they doing here! Didn’t they go offline?

Megatron: Yes this is very interesting. But we need to destroy the Maximals NOW! Scorponok and Terrasaur, Get up and help up!

Scorponok and Terrasaur: Yes Megatron!

Cheetor: Okay guys! Let’s send these guys to the Scrap heap!

Optimus Prime: Okay, we need to cause a distraction and take these guys down! Cheetor, you and Rattrap go around without being seen, and surprise them. Rihnox, Dinobot and I will continue to fire at them!

Narrator: As Cheetor and Rattap are going through with the plan, Blacharania and Tarantulus arrive at the second Rift, and it Begins to Pulsate.

Blacharania: What do you think it is? And What it’s doing?

Tarantulus: It seems to be a portal, but the readings are saying that it is a portal to another Dimension!

Blacharania: Well then. It looks like we are going to have some company!

Narrator: out of the Flash two shadows land on the ground, a third shadow is then followed. Blacharania and Tarantulus Look up and see a standoff between 3 bots.

*a panel of the zoomed in bots*

Unknown bot #3: You will never go through with your plan Ravage! I am here to stop you!



thanks for looking more of the story and maybe some art will be added soon!

[Jazz227]

The beginning will be edited and redone and well... longer haha. i just notice what i did now :P

[Jazz227]

Updated with the frist two pages of script

[Robimus]

Here comes Stampy, maybe

[Jazz227]

Tonight i should get a little closer to the Neo stuff being added in :P i have 4 more pages to add, i'll add them 2 pages per day

[Jazz227]

Here are the next 2 pages !!!!!!!!!!



Ravage: well then I guess you are going to have to die along with the traitor MAXIMAL!

Blacharania and Tarantulus: MAXIMAL?!?!

Unkown Maximal: I cannot let you go any Further! You and Tripedacus will either leave here dead or alive, and my job is to make sure you end up dead.

Ravage: you are just making the same mistakes the Predacons did back on Cybertron! TRIPEDACUS FORM AND ATTACK!!! Make sure Magnaboss does not leave here alive!

*Tripedacus forms together to make a monster*

Magnaboss: I am the samurai, I am the one who will be victorious!

*A close up of magnaboss*

*A panned out panel of Tripedacus and Magnaboss*

Blacharania: do you think we should help these guys out? They seem to be losing to one Maximal!

Tigatron: I don’t think so Predacon!

Blacharania: TIGATRON! Looks like we will have to take care of you once and for all! Blacharania Terrorize!

Tarrantulus: Tarrantulus TERRORIZE!

Airazor: Tigatron is not alone in this fight!

Narrator: As Optimus and his team take down the Predacons, they are unaware of the second rift or the battle

Megatron:RETREAT!!!

*panel of the Predacons fleeing*

Optimus Prime: Ha! The Megatron would flee! But we still need to get some information about what is going on here.

Cheetor: Yeah because the last time I checked Scorponok and Terrasaur got turned into slag!

Optimus Prime: I wonder what the computer is going to say about the readings we got?

Narrator: Back at the Maximals base, Optimus notices the alert for a second rift!

Optimus Prime: Cheetor, You and Silverbolt go see what is going on!

Silverbolt: Ah I finally get to feel the wind against my wings and get ready for a possible battle!

Cheetor: yeah, yeah, just hurry up!

*a panel of cheetor and Silverbolt flying over to see the two battles happening*

Tripedacus: You have some skill Maximal, I will give you that! But you will never defeat us!

Magnaboss: the only way this is going to end Predacon traitor is with your spark in my hand!

Ravage: we need to retreat Tripedacus! he is not our target, and we have work to do!

Tripedacus: Fine, we will see you soon Maximal! We will finish you off once and for all!

*panel of Magnaboss on the battle field alone*

Narrator: While Tripedacus and Ravage flee, Tigatron and Airazor are joined by Cheetor and Silverbolt

Blacharania: looks like this fight is no longer worth it! Let’s go back to the base.

Narrator: Airazor and Tigatron are greeted by Magnaboss.

Magnaboss: where is your leader? I wish to speak with him.

Airazor: out leader is at our base, I can take you there. But I would revert to beast mode because there is a lot of Energon in this area.

*Magnaboss splits into three different bots, Silverbolt, Ironhide and Prowl*

Airazor: Wow! You guys are the full package. Tigatron, will you join us?

Tigatron: No, I must make sure this area is safe.

Airazor: okay, I’ll see you soon.

Narrator: Back at the Axalon, Magnaboss Explains why he is here and how he got here.

Magnaboss: Where I come from, the factions of cybertron are not at war. The Maximals are casted as renegades, and some are prisoners of war. The Predacons won in numbers and our leaders could not stop them. Megatron grew more powerful every day, until the day he got too much power. the Tripedacus council wanted him out of power. So they sent ravage and his Partner Tripedacus to kill Megatron, their attempt was failed. Megatron saw them coming and took down what was left of the tripedacus council. The Maximals are attempting to grow their numbers and take down megatron, but they will not win. Some of the Maximals overheard a plan going on between Ravage, Tripedacus and what was left of the Tripedacus council, to go into the past and destroy Megatron, so that our future will change. Some of the Maximals wanted this to happen and some did not, they asked me to find and take down Ravage and Tripedacus before they go through the Rift and change everything. But I failed.

Rattrap: Uhhh… so you’re saying that if you don’t destroy ravage, we lose the beast wars?

Magnaboss: No, I am not saying that. What I am saying is that if I don’t kill ravage my future will be hopeless.

Dinobot: Your future will be hopeless either way! Why didn’t you and the Maxima;s throw Megatron out of power when you had a chance?

Magnaboss: Because, Megatron moved too fast, and had too many men behind him. We would be at an endless fight.

Rattrap: Well… being an expert in explosives and stealth, you could have. PLANTED A BOMB!

[Jazz227]

I have to stop posting the pages at 1 in the morning :P

[Jazz227]

Two more pages


Magnaboss: I will not argue about what could have been done, I need to find Ravage before be can change the future!

Cheetor: Well.. my best guess is that they would head for the Pred’s base.

Magnaboss: Optimus, with your permission, I would like to take a small team to help me capture Ravage and Tripedacus.
Optimus Prime: Okay, you can take Cheetor, Dinobot and Rattrap. Move Silently, there is no telling what could happen. Especially with what’s been going on recently.

Narrator: As Magnaboss and the others arrived at the Predacon base, something big was already happening inside.

*A few minutes earlier*

Megatron: Scorponok, Terrasaur. Explain yourselves, IMMIDIANTLY!

Scorponok: Well….. Megatron….. we… we found a Blackhole, and you blasted us and we fell in.

Terrasaur: yeah. Except you weren’t all shiney….. and couldn’t fly.

Megatron: I guess I should congratulate you, Yes. now we are two men stronger. We might actually be able to win this war.

*From the shadows, a yell comes*

*CRASH*

Tripedacus: We, are Tripedacus, we are here on orders from the Tripedacus council. TO TAKE YOU DOWN!

Megatron: *Claps* I guess I will have to listen to your story as well….. But I won’t, PREDACONS ATTACK!

*A shot from the darkness whistles by Waspinators head and hits Quickstrike in the eyes*

Tripedacus: We were not kidding, we are not alone.

Waspinator: Waspinator very confused as to why giant bug bot talk like three bots.

Megatron: I’ve heard of you, Yes. You were too strong for the council to control.

Tripedacus: We are not him, we are from another universe, and we are not leaving here without your spark! RAVAGE ATTACK!

*a firefight between Ravage, Tripedacus and the Predacons goes on*

Cheetor: Hey! Rattrap! Stop getting so close, you might make the vent fall.

Rattrap: Be happy Dino Butt isn’t in here with us.

Cheetor: I don’t even understand why we have to go through the vents, and Dinobot gets to go through the front door?

Dinobot: For one thing, I can shut up when entering the enemy base.

Rattrap: you really think the Pred’s can hear us over all that shooting?

Dinobot: Wait! I can see the Predacons have been defeated, but I do not see Ravage, Tripedacus or Megatron!

Cheetor: Hey Magnaboss! Do you read me? MAGNABOSS!

Narrator: Unknown to what has happened; Magnaboss has been confronted by an unknown enemy.

Bludgeon: Finally! I have found an Autobot that I can Finally have a good fight with. I have been searching for years and timelines to find the right opponent!

Magnaboss: If it’s a fight you want, I have no time for this.

Bludgeon: well you have time now.

Magnaboss: I am on a mission stranger; I do not wish to fight.

Bludgeon: my circuits read you are weak from your travels. It seems I we may have to wait for this battle, but I warn you now autobot. I will have this battle.

*Bludgeon walks away into the darkness*

Rattrap: Hey! Who was that guy?

Magnaboss: I do not know, but I believe he called me an autobot.

Dinobot: Autobot?! Very strange.

Magnaboss: whoever he is, it does not matter. Did you find ravage and tripedacus?

Rattrap: yes but….

Magnaboss: But what?

Dinobot: everyone was slag and Megatron was missing, along with ravage and the insects.

Magnaboss: They must be planning an execution. I must find them immidiatley!

*Back at the base the Maximals devise a plan*

Cheetor: But Optimus!

Optimus Prime: No cheetor! That is final! I will not risk anyone for this stupidity!

Dinobot: I have to agree with Optimus on this one. It is idiotic if we ask them if they knew where ravage was heading with megatron.

Cheetor: but maybe one of them over heard something!!!!

Optimus Prime: I do not care! Magnaboss; tell me about this mystery samurai.