I am not too sure where to put this so here we go! haha This is just something random i wanted to do for a while, i have a long but not done Sort of story for it, Try to refrain from commenting on my writing skills as i am very tired and did this in an hour
Okay i decided to make this into a script, mostly because once i do the actual comic book i have something to follow!
Here are the first 2 pages of the script
I hope you guys like it, and could give me some ideas and some things aren't too indepth yet, but i will get to it at one point!
Narrator: On Earth, A battle goes on between the Maximals and the Predacons. The battle has lasted over a century, and the Beast wars rage on. The Maximals and what remains of the Autobots are still searching for the Axalon.
Maximal Computer: A rift has opened in the sky over Sector 5.213, Alert is in affect as of now, Lock down liniment.
RatTrap: Oh man! This is not good! We better get to safety like the computer says!!!
Optimus Prime: No Rattrap, we need to check this out and make sure the Predacons don’t get there first. We need to get a reading on it to make sure it won’t kill us.
Rattrap: This is not going to go well
*SMACK!*
Rhinox: Rattrap just prepare the reader so we can get this done with.
Narrator: In the Predacon base the Predacons are preparing to take down whatever may come through the Rift.
Megatron: Predacons! We must get to the rift first, Yes. We must make sure we can take control of the area before those Maximals do, Yes.
Blacharania: Megatron! The Maximal base will be on lockdown, the rift has put a scare on their computer, and I am sure the Maximals are already on their way to get control of the area!
Megatron: Fine, Blacharania and Tarantulus, go to the maximal base and destroy it while they are not there! They will be so distracted they will lose to the might of the Predacons! Yes. The rest of you come with me to get control of the area, because if we do not succeed I will not be happy, No.
Narrator: While the Predacons and the Maximals were on their way to the surrounding area of the rift, Blacharania and
Tarantulus get the bomb together to blow the Maximal base to the outer moons!*
Narrator: As the Maximals and Predacons were arriving they noticed one thing, the rift was a portal to another Dimension, but the portal was only sending, not receiving.
Optimus prime: Okay Rattrap,Dinobot and cheetor go take care of the Predacons while Rhinox and I set up the Reader to see where this thing leads!
Cheetor: Okay Big Bot! Let’s trash some Pred butt’s!
Dinobot: Finally! My blade can take Predacon spark!
Megatron: You Maximals have no chance against us! Waspinator, QuickStrike, ATTACK!
*Battle scene*
Blacharania: perfect! The Maximals are fighting while we are in here to destroy the Axalon!
Tarantulus: Just hurry up, the Maximal computer will detect us soon enough!
Maximal Computer: Another Rift has opened in Sector 9.43, Alert to Maximals Near by!
Blacharania: Looks like something BIG is going to happen, and we don’t have to do a thing!
Tarantulus: I think we should go check out what is going on! Just be sure to set the timer on the bomb before we leave!
Narrator: As the Maximals were at a relentless fight against the Predacons, The rift over them begins to pulsate.*
Rattrap: Hey Rhinox! What is going on!!!
Rhinox: I think something is coming through!
*A big flash, and two things come falling down from the Rift*
Cheetor: Big Bot look! It’s Scorponok and Terrasaur!
*Waspinator looks up*
Waspinator: Waspinator think this was a bad day to go outside.
*SQUISH!*
Waspinator: Oh… Waspinator Hurt in every Area except his head.7
*Terrasaurs Gun falls on his head* *BOINK*
Quickstrike: What are they doing here! Didn’t they go offline?
Megatron: Yes this is very interesting. But we need to destroy the Maximals NOW! Scorponok and Terrasaur, Get up and help up!
Scorponok and Terrasaur: Yes Megatron!
Cheetor: Okay guys! Let’s send these guys to the Scrap heap!
Optimus Prime: Okay, we need to cause a distraction and take these guys down! Cheetor, you and Rattrap go around without being seen, and surprise them. Rihnox, Dinobot and I will continue to fire at them!
Narrator: As Cheetor and Rattap are going through with the plan, Blacharania and Tarantulus arrive at the second Rift, and it Begins to Pulsate.
Blacharania: What do you think it is? And What it’s doing?
Tarantulus: It seems to be a portal, but the readings are saying that it is a portal to another Dimension!
Blacharania: Well then. It looks like we are going to have some company!
Narrator: out of the Flash two shadows land on the ground, a third shadow is then followed. Blacharania and Tarantulus Look up and see a standoff between 3 bots.
*a panel of the zoomed in bots*
Unknown bot #3: You will never go through with your plan Ravage! I am here to stop you!
thanks for looking more of the story and maybe some art will be added soon!